I love you,
I want you,
I can't be without you,
I'll spend the rest of my life making yours a happy one,
My life; my soul; my only sun,
I'm nothing without your touch.
I hate you,
I don't want you,
I can be without you,
I'll spend the rest of my life making yours a miserable one,
My shadow, my cast away, my stray.
I'm everything without your touch.
I did'nt mean those words i said,
Please come back to bed,
Don't leave;
Its you i grieve.....
I can't remember any actions,
Unpicked seems a dream,
I wake with the mistake that i pushed you away,
Sent you a drift in a lost sea of tears,
I'm hurting, its never been easy loving someone like me,
Don't leave ......
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it sucks loving someone you cant have, its horrible
I live with that every single day of my life, i wish i could be with him.
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my darling brother this made me cry
as i too have done this
it was a great write, so dont stop... or little sister is gonna kick your smexy ass
ANYWAY again great write and there is one line that is a lie but i wont go there now, if your wanting to know which line you is gonna have to message and ask...
Love you Half/Step Brother
XxoxX
Rose
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this is an amazing write. i absolutly love this piece. i think ur an amazing writter and i would be so happy if i could get ur opinion on some of my pieces
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the first stanza is basically what im feeling now cause there is this guy who i absolutly adore ...
...but i cant be with him
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this would make a very beautiful song and such a good write
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Reminded me of Lithium by Evanescence great job hun!!!
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AWESOME! 11/10!
yeah i totally agree with Mrs. Mautino it would make an awesomeee song!!
i loved this, like really really, i loooved!! this, its soooo sad, but its like...argh i cant explain, i hope whoever this is too comes back to you :-)
great write!
Take Care xxx
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Gd JoB..
WoW I LiKe It..
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Ah, yes, we all forget the "think before you speak" rule a lot, it seems. However, Lexi, no one is hard or easy to love...the trick to it is to know how to work with the other person. If they love you and stay to find out, then they're worth
This is a sad poem, but I think everyone can relate to it one way or another. I think it could even make for a good song! I hope all is well, Lexi, and that you are finding love
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