The first time you touched me I thought the world had stopped
It had for me, in that moment all I could see was you
what I seen in your eyes, reflecting back to me
this unimaginable amount of love and passion
I seen an entire lifetime full of warmth and happiness
Dreams always seem to come crashing down
seems like just when I think something is certain
is when it all crumbles, blackened ash and mottled hope
thats all I see in your eyes now, all that reflects
violated trust, deep seething rage
a victim of your action, victim of your falicies
you told me today you cant stand yourself, cant look in the mirror
how could you? Do you expect my sympathy when because of you
I have lost everything in my life that was ever pure and good
so I sit here, letting my thoughts rape my sanity
just hoping for some light on this path ahead
Please tell me what you think
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Awe, Kimmers. I love this. Is it about the divorce? Sorry. Just wondering. I think you'll be better off without him. Because it sounds to me like he made you miserable in the end. But I guess nothing lasts forever. At least you held onto what you had, until it was completely gone. You will make it through, though. Life always goes on. It never stops because of one little mishap. Somewhere down the road, you will find true happiness. Even if a man is not the one to create it for you. Only you can create it within yourself. I'm just sorry that it had to end like this. Evidently, no love will ever be a fairytale. It's a struggle. Everything takes a little work, even if it never turns out the way you wanted. This piece is heart wrenching and the pain pierced through my eyes as I was reading this. I can relate to this very well. My favorite lines are:
Dreams always seem to come crashing down
seems like just when I think something is certain
is when it all crumbles, blackened ash and mottled hope
that's all I see in your eyes now, all that reflects
Beautiful imagery. I'm simply awestruck, left speechless. Amazingly done. Splendid job. You possess talent in poetry. Keep penning.
-Kaity-
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