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It Continues

Circular motions
Breezy winds pass through
Sun beaming
as the circular motions continue

Daylight
because the sun rose
Soon the day will be night
because for no one the time won't be put on hold

I say that to say
My life is like the days that pass by
It doesn't revovle around you
It continues until I die...

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