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Binary Decomposition

Two heads rest on a table laced with blood...
Their bodies in the corner, beginning to decay...
Upon the wall is blood that had sprayed...

Gore caked handsaw, bathed in visceral mud...
The two heads gently decay, in one a gory hole embed...
It reeks of death in this dilapidated shed...

Maggots will hatch from the bodies in a flood...
The decay escapes and materializes on the walls...
From the ceiling, in ghastly shapes, it falls...

Two heads rest on a table laced with blood...
Light from a nearby lantern gently flickering.

 

 

 

 

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  • Ravensdark
    September 9

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    It almost seems like a poem of lovers. Enjoying their final decomposition together. Perhaps I am just in a strange frame of mind, but I see a romantic element here. Effect use of the refrain, I am quite fond of refrains myself. Another great work of macabre art.


  • stef-witt gold member
    September 4

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    I felt like I could smell this as I read it.

    AWESOME!


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    August 8

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    again you amaze with your gorey images! i dunno how you do it but you turn something disgusting into an art form with your words. always painting a picture of mahem in our heads.

    brilliant


  • JesskaSlayde
    August 6

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    the nature of this poem is just horrific. i love it so much. your poems are so amazingly disgusting. you are truely talented. you should get your work published


  • albymyheart gold member
    July 25

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    Interesting description of a murder secene. I could picture it well. I like the way you added the spray of blood on the wall and the gore-caked handsaw. Nice and bloody, makes you wonder of the story leading up to this scene...Alby


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    July 24

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    its like you have a vivid image in your head and I have to say, you have a talent for displaying this image to the reader so that they see exactly what you see...in other words, incredible details and descriptions!

    well done


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    July 24

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    I agree with the previous comment, you are a master of this, your imagery Is outstanding


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 22

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    Done with care these two heads
    will out last their bodies you see
    side by side hanging in the trees

    You are the master of gore here
    where your words paint with glee
    vivid scenes of the dead for all to see


  • Icy girl
    July 21
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    What a perfect read on this dark and stormy night here. Thank you for another great read!


  • SheWasPreternatural
    July 21

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    bravo gore head :P

    vivid imagery and intricate detail as always- the way you weave the darker picture always astounds me... the title is fantastic and the ending stanzas really lets the whole of it sink in. masterful as always. -T


  • sweet arrival gold member
    July 21

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    the title alone started giving me chills... but as always, you write this so well, the darkness, the gore. to me, that last line makes it even eerier. there's just something about a flickering lantern that sets this scene.


  • liltulip gold member
    July 21
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    i like how life reaper expressed it

    thank you for these great escapes into the darkness...

    you pen your words well here


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    July 21

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    This is yet another great write off you John welldone... as life reaper says you sure do know how to pen the darkness and paint a vivid picture in ones mind... I love your writes so keep them coming my AP best friend

    luv DinkyDiver xxx


  • lifereaper
    July 21

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    wow bro,you sure can paint a vivd picture,you pen the darkness so well,i stand by what i said before brother,you are definitely the king of macabre,looking forward to more of these great escapes into the darkness

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