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Race You to the Sky

Lies

Baby your love
Was all lies

And in your eyes
She was captured by cupid
So wisely disguised

But just like that
Love quickly dies
With no condolences
With no goodbyes

And while a broken heart
Bleeds and cries
Watery eyes
Look towards the sky
With turning thoughts of suicide

And as she took her last breath
She whispered this
I’ll race you to the sky
Your evil now has no disguise
Your unjust heart may have brought me down
But it is my soul that is free and flies

Author notes

i kinda just threw this together.
the rhyme in it was not intentional at first. i was just writing. i was almost finished when i noticed it. i hope its not too much. i meant to write a free verse

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