Suffering in mind...
Another illusion!!!
Black mascara, runs down the side of her cheeks..
Tears dribble from her eyes..
Those beautiful shattered grey eyes..
Painless as she may feel
Breathing intensively
Pain is identifing
Standing-in a damn puddle of blood!
Torn up shoes..
Alone in the dark
Crying by yourself..
Nobody to hold..
Alone in the cold...
Thinking....Weakless...
Imma die now...
Taking ones own life, is NOT worth losing a life of crazy unexpected journeys!
Stand up,Build up......
A Heart,at 7 pounds..
Now stronger than Beyond.....
Goodnight too all!!!
!!Hope you like it!!If You got this far, please leave a Comment!! Thanks!! :-)
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oh wow this was amazing ^_^
I really like it
"Taking ones own life, is NOT worth losing a life of crazy unexpected journeys!" <-- that line is so true. there are so many good and crazy things to live for. the little beautys that make life better each day
love this
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i liked the way it flowed and the meaning of it all
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Sometimes it's scary the way my poetry mirrors others, but this is good, I was a little confused towards the end...what or who you were writing about. I was actually thinking about a baby, then maybe suicide? perhaps an explanation?
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This was suppose to go with a picture that prompt my poem!! It was a girl in the dark by herself crying! It was also for a contest but IDK what happen there.. Maybe it is meant for suicide, I'm against it!! Most I know when they feel as life is to tough that's the only way to turn!! So at the end I twisted the poem towards becomin stronger! I lost my God-brother 10 years ago and it feels like yesterday..(I also have a poem on hiM,"10years")
Maybe it makes a little more since?? Thanks for ur comment!
*Kelsi*
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This in some ways reminds me of a poem I once wrote. It is interesting and makes you think of the story and emotions behind the words. There seems to be much fear and frustration.
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