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Prayer



there inside the conscience mind
criminal contrition lurks behind
self-blame is her eternal hell
bended knees lift this spell

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  • Nom de Plume
    July 21

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    interesting write, a sense of self loathing yet also the empowerment to overcome it...
    enjoyed the read...

  • Bob Fox
    July 21

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    Criminal contrition? Slick phrase. The evil mind making amends? I do suppose for some anything is possible poet.