Clawing at the air I struggle to BREATHE
Angry, VIOLATED
I struggle just to SCREAM.
Fight me! Damn you WOMAN
Damn you to MY HELL
The one who put me in.
Let me LIVE.
Let me leave you behind
All I want is a new BEGINNING
FUCK YOU
let me breathe....
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Jordy. You sound angryy. I've never seen you angry, and, damn, I'm scared. Lol. I'm sorry for whatever happened? I just...don't know what to say, other than 'sorry'. There is a lot of raw emotion put into this...very nice. It's intense. Like, majorlyy. I can definitely relate to this piece. I've been put through that situation so many times, and much more than I deserved -.-. Writer's block, my ass. Pfft. This is wonderful, deary. My favorite lines are:
Clawing at the air, I struggle to BREATHE
Angry, VIOLATED
I struggle just to SCREAM.
Lovely. The words, of course. Not the situation. Well done on this piece. You have much talent, regardless of anything bad you have to say about your work. Keep penning.
-Kaity-
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This is extremely intense and expressive. I know you will find your new beginning.
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