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A Life Taken Forever

Gun fire ruptures around our loved ones
there lives become taken forever

never to return to us
taking from our lives, but still in our hearts

forever to be remembered, never to be forgotten
a life taken forever has left me and my soul rotten

why does there have to be such violence
its deadly and leaves everything in silence

but now a life is taken forever
the spirit has come to visit

and he tells me he is doing well
he says he is in a better place
and i look at him with a smile as tears roll my face

his wings flutter and his halo shines bright
as he flies off into the heavenly night


ANTHONY AKA STACKS
8-15-91 ...7-18-09

a poem about my friend who was murdered on my bday 7-18-09

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  • its a really good dedication for a friend. so sorry you lost him on your birthday.


  • sexyremedy
    July 21

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    im so sorry bout ur friend baby i kno u n him were like tight friends n it must be hard for u but remember the ones he loves as friend n family he will watch over inclueding u babe.
    im here if u need to talk baby <33333333

  • Awwwh my God
    I'm so sorry, I hope your friend rests in peace
    A very sad write and painfull to read, the people who did this to your friend deserve bad punishments as murder is a bad thing of course and should be dealt with very seriously. I hope you are okay anyway, stay strong he wouldn't want you to be sad now would he?