And I too will comfort you -
Be it brief,
Console you as I can do,
With a blanket, a handkerchief
A rare flower or two.
-Let us think no more of sadness then,
Since the end is near,
Since I am watching the sunlight this day, reappear
Adorn you in its own way.
You yourself are searching,
For something strangely beautiful to say.
A contest entry
- Beautiful Poetry please... by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended July 24, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the HM. Have to go to a funeral today, an old friends wife died...
Wrote some haiku last night, listening to Cold Play. If was personally rewarding; don't know if the stuff was any good though... -
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Thanks,
Thanks, friend,
sorry to hear that news. I'll be sure to drop by and check out your new writes.
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A subtle sadness, yet beautiful in it's expression. Very touching indeed.
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Thank You
Thank you for your kind comment, friend.
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I did it. I birthed it during today's thunderstorm. Over at deercatcher, Lachrymal
This is absolutely transcendent; and a perfect joy to read.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dg6ocDjLsw0&NR=1
Like the new rare flower avitar. Looks like a water lilly... -
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Thanks,
Thanks for your kind comments friend,
....It is indeed, a rare type of lotus.
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It leaves me wondering to what the poem refers...end of a relationship? a life? A time that can never return? Whatever the actual reference, it is quite charming in its sense of beauty and new beginning.
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thanks, friend
again it's about the loss of my mother, though it's not alltogether transparent here.
Thank You for such thoughtful comments Yem.
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good rhyme scheme.. good title.. and use of words..
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Thanks,
Thanks ailill,
that's kind of you to say.
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