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Two People

    A soft kiss between two endearing souls I witnessed on a bridge illuminated by golden sunset.
Eyes locking, arms enfolding...
         lips touch...
              hearts glow.
    For but seconds they savor and seem to share everything, and gracefully pull apart. Not pulling, so much as swaying, like the breeze... wind through the gentle heart. She stands, absorbing the sunlight, he beckons her to follow. Dancing to him longinly, he brushes her hair aside... behind her ear placing a wild flower - golden as the retiring orb - meant for no other but her.
    Words spoken, actions taken, another soft elegant kiss...

    Eyes meet,
          arms enfolding.
              Their hearts forever a'glow.

    Perhaps you think it wrong of me to watch and record so frivilously, but the romantics of the world are my audience. Those who believe, hunger and strive for what they know to be.

I've so hungerd.
Oh, how I've believed...
I've strived with everything I've ever been...

    And when you've finally, and unmistakenly succeeded, it's good to see others on their galiant way.
    I look down to pen the beauty I've witnessed, the wonder I felt, but they're gon by my gaze's swift return.
    The birds of the park wander past.

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  • Sunset Dreamer
    August 11, 2009

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    Beautiful, andy, just beautiful

    i didnt think you were capable of such joy. such unadulterated happiness that would cause you to gaze upon anothers love without scorn or cynicism. it makes me smile a sad smile, because i too wish to be so happy. but i know that if YOU found happiness, so will i. no offense dearest.lol. i'm happy that you're happy though. thank her for me, for giving one of my friends sunlight, the first snow, the end of a good book, the curtain call, all by being herself and loving you.


    • Andrew Bernau
      August 18, 2009
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      Have I told you lately that I love you?

      Seriously Kira, you've been my friend for ages now, and you've never steared me wrong. This is like my sixth time reading over this review of your's, and it's also the sixth time that it's made me smile.

      You'll find happiness. I know you will. You're too fantastic of a person to not. If Andy might, per chance, be bold enough to offer you a little bit of advice that struck me like a lightning bolt when I first relized my feeling for Kelly. It's always better for a friend to become a lover, then to have a lover who tries to become your friend. Take it as you will. But find someone you trust more than anyone first, and then open up more and more doors to them until eventually... you two are closer than you've ever been with anyone ever before.