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Whispering Stars



~divine~
whispering stars
dream of moonlight dances
shimmering rays of reflection
rebounding back from seas; light-years below
fantasy of enlightenment
as the whispering stars
dance together
~divine~

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  • pvenugopal
    October 30

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    this is beautiful. to hear the stars whisper and see them dance together and to feel light years freeze into a moment...this is when you are in communion with God.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 12
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    lovely images - divine indeed.


  • Jaffa-
    August 19

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    That was really beautiful.
    Every word was perfectly placed and it was a fantastic description.
    Very well done.
    xx


  • xxiheartpoetryxx
    August 10
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    nice description..its like i can see the view...xo

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 23
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    uniquely enchanting... x

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