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The Henchman Fails

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Out late one night for a moonlight ride

with evil there lurking by her side,

a henchman with instructions to maim

kill, steal and destroy his master's game.

 

 

 

Her soul heading for imminent hell

helpless to break the sinister spell,

a dirge echoing inside her head

soon she'd join the ranks of the wicked dead.

 

 

With all her might she began to pray

God forgive me for going astray,

guilty I am of atrocious crime

I turned away from your laws sublime.

 


Her prayer was ended in Jesus name

freed was the damsel from all her shame,

He sent the henchman straight back to hell

within His arms she'll forever dwell.

 

 

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Pic credit to Kristina Gehrmann

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 11
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    Awesome write here

    Wow this should have been a gold for sure honey


  • Emmyb gold member
    July 29
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    Definitely fantastical!

  • Excellent write on the prompt. Congratulations on your trophy So well deserved.
    Gaylene


  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 21

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    Good title, write and interpretation of the picture prompt. A lovely message of forgiveness and redemption. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice rhythm. Very good depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Thank you for your entry.


  • daviscth silver member
    July 21
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    What a wonderful story to compliment the picture! I enjoyed this very much.

  • goalsv
    July 21

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    An excellent look into the picture. I love the way you put the tone in more of a positive and spiritual light than the dark and sinister look with evil overtones. Showing hope when we rebell and leave God and knowing He is there for mour return.


    • Frogzter gold member
      July 21
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      Thanks goals! I have missed you. How have you been? Hope all is well in your world.

      Love and light,

      Frogz~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 21

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    wow

    wonderful imagery, and a sweet rhyme and flow..also the story was very engaging..good stuff lady!

    • Frogzter gold member
      July 21
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      Thanks so much my friend! So glad to see you hanging in there. I left the site for 6 months and missed it terribly. Could not wait to get back. Hope all is well and keep on keeping on!

      Love and light,

      Frogz~


  • Sherry gold member
    July 20

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    Peed my pants I was so scared LOL... Just kidding.

    Hey sissy, bit different this felt creepy and how darkness took over almost a persons soul but the ending of Gods love is beautiful. Love you ♥

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