Mr.Light can you tell me why ,why the world goes too slow and sometimes choses not to go at all. Mr.Light help me realize that I'm not the only one who dies inside. Mr.Light take my sentences and hide them in the ground that has buried me. Mr.Light your brightness has shined on to our lives, to make them pure. By making one of our lights shine they can inflame other candles. I wonder if we all followed you, then we would discover in our life, what's true. Mr.Light I wish not to rue this day, and with the power of your light I'll stand and fight with you forever.
Author notes
Song chose was Lithium. DISTANCERUNNER
A contest entry
- A Giant Evanescence Contest by Nienna Calmcacil.
1300 points, ended September 17, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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I don't really see how this is relevant to "Lithium"--or Evanescence-- at all. Also, the format was very distracting-- it's hard to read, and I couldn't stay very focused.
I sensed some form of ... maybe religiousness here. I did like that, but the flaws of the poem took away any form of hope that I had for it. I'm sorry... -
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Relgiuos?
I wasn't ment to be religiuos and I just thought i would give it a shot and see what would happen, really didn't think I would win anyways....
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very creative, an inspiring write, great job!
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thanks
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your welcome
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