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Luscious Blue Skies!

Luscious blue skies
directly in view
music tenderly swaying
our hearts, minds, bodies and souls
as contented as could be
tender lips kissing
not coming up for air
at a place where
I could stay forever
but only in his arms!

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 11
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    lovely lines that are anything but blue. all i see are blue skies, nothing but blue skies......

    a joy to read.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    August 13
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    I really like this, great piece and well written.
    Beautiful!

    -Broken-

  • a u r a
    July 21

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    Bonita

    Sigh! this is soooo romantic and bonita! the sensuality in this poem is very becoming-lovely simply lovely