Note from author:
I'n not putting this below because after you read this you will think I'm weird. Lets get this straight. There's a boy and a girl I know and the boy asked me to write a love poem from him to her. So I did. He loved it and she loved it. This is how it goes, it's from the boy's point of view:
Her eyes are colored hazel
a beautiful color a day
and when she's looking right at me
she's taking my breath away
Beyond intelligent, beautiful, and smart
she makes you laugh a lot
her hair a silky blonde color
I can't take my eyes of her, no I cannot!
When I'm away from her
I think of her every second of the day
a wonderful girl I'll never forget
her name is Jacquay
what do you think?????
Comments
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great job
I don't think you're weird to write this; nor do I think the poem itself is weird. I can't imagine why you would think of it or yourself that way. This to me is a deep,touching expression of love which I'm sure this boy will find very useful in regards to expressing his love for his girlfriend. You did a fine job with this. Keep up the good work.
Brian -
This was really nice. i especially like the rhyme. very good. please keep writing.
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