A place to blend and belong
to be a watcher not just passing
where I cast an open mind
and draw pigeons.
Soft undulating coos
scrabble in whirls of dust
and I am brought forward
to where life is
ground and sieved
sustainable and ongoing.
For a moment
to be God
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Expression of a timeless quest
"A place to blend and belong". It sounds like the quest of so many lives during so many lifetimes on this planet. No wonder you think of it as "for a moment to be God". Your poetry has a timeless feel to it when you write like this, almost as if the longer you have lived, the more time has enveloped itself within your writing to be the expression of past, present, and future thought, like a being that is not limited to the physical. It is a pleasure to travel down this poetic "timeline" through your writing.
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and I am brought forward
to where life is
ground and sieved
sustainable and ongoing. - my favorite part.
this piece has a peacefulness about it - perhaps imparting the peace of that power if but transitory.
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For a moment
to be God
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reads like a prayer, very beautiful. Great write. -
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Thanks. Someone is paying attention. Great encouragement.
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interesting
very nice and easy to read..to be a watcher not just passing
where I cast an open mind
these are my 2 favorite lines..
Patrick
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