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your heart

i felt it

the flutter of wings
beneath veined bars
a cage--
yours or mine?
both?
neither?

i stopped breathing
in all the chaos
and you pressed it against mine
inspiring it
giving it a rhythm to
follow behind
soft watery thuds
growing stronger
and stronger
until i was calm

your heart beat
strong and steady
and i
well i collided with it that night
head-on

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  • Vernal
    July 20
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    Beautiful, very much so. And truthful.

  • Eusebius
    July 20

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    A fine romantic piece with many possible meanings depending upon the reader's current mood or disposition... fine write!!!