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Wonder-ment

I am on a journey with a destination of know
I am hitting hitches expected but it feels strange in this know

I am playing with forces and curses at crossroads and bows
Everything that makes me say wow
later magnifies itself to such a slow

I am seeking speed and sanity seems slow with the glow

Question:
Am I expecting too much
Assuming too much
or
Wanting many too quick
And this journey, this journey is still a progressing
not just a click....

ask yourself then, tell me

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  • lefthanded
    July 24
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    thanks guys for your comments. i just sat on the computer and wrote this straight away by instinct and i also did with a worry that it might not be good enough but your comments are ecouraging, thanks a Milli.


  • ckwriter69
    July 23

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    Interesting perspective! I think the journey must be taken in small steps so we may absorb what is all around us. Too often we miss the obvious in our quest for answers that we come to expect and assume too much.


  • Susan John Francis
    July 21

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    Provoking ones own thought and trying to defines the purpose of living is the road which gets us some seriously right answers.... I had all those questions for at least 1 year ( last year) but found answers....

    This is a real write...Thanks for sharing ..

    Love
    susan