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Merchants (3)

Pillars
Porticoes
Frame
Square

Rectangles
Of
Table
Ware

Beyond
Arches
Merchants
Hover

Kings
Scales
Must
Cover

Dusky
Hours
Creeping
In

Curtains
Close
Merchants
Flee

Merchandise
Brought
With
Me

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    August 5

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    It's a bit heavy Hmm.... I love the rhyme but don't quite understand the meaning of the poem but yet in all, the words flow together well and i'm sure that others besides myself can relate to your poem. Better luck my freinds with another poem next time.
    Blessing!
    Sharon


    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      August 5
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      It could be interpreted as a medieval marketplace, although other interpretations might be possible. Thanks for your comments; compliments, and applause for I do appreciate them.


  • hisaddiction
    July 22
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    I've never seen/read a poem like this before. it's refreshing. lovely.


  • Antipodi
    July 20
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    Forgot the clappies

  • Antipodi
    July 20

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    Now thats what I call underground commercial prose ..one can hear the sounds of retail and cash registers ...an excellent write on the subject dear poet

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