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Why did he love me

Together forever,
Thats what I wanted it to be,
But the day my dreams are going to come true,
I find out that he died.

But he lied to me,
I cuss him out,
Yelling at him,
All the pain inside me unleashed.

I don't care if I lose him,
I can never love again though,
I curse his name,
Hoping he finaly dies.

Author notes

This actualy happened to me. I was going to get married on July 14, 2009. But my fiance broke up with me the day of the wedding.

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