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Lemons and Limes

The flavor and scent is amazing
I love to eat fresh lemons some times
I like lime in my cooking
it brings flavor alive
I sit here and draw my lemon
and lime
as I take my
time

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Darlene Long

A contest entry

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  • Oh yes I could certainly taste the prompt in your poem. The rhyme at the end was excellent. Thank you for your entry
    gaylene


  • leo2
    July 24

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    Until I planted a lemon and a lime tree did I know the joy of watching them grow or the bitter/sweet taste of the harvest. Best wishes in the contest.

    xoxox
    Leo


  • Tqop
    July 20
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    I love the flow of it.

  • I love lemons and limes!

  • *chuckle*

    Mmmmmm, lemons....... refreshing! Good one, Darlene.

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