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Ode to legality

To be young and pretty, blessed with good looks,

Siren like glances reeling in the rooks;

Eighteen candles eve, a maiden so fair

Could party like mad, the devil may care.

To knock back drinks, rock up the dancefloor

Is quite simply what our brief youth is for:

Endorphin rushed, violet hazed evening

Wondering what the year ahead shall bring.



Undoubtedly, a newer adventure.



To travel new seas, a brush with danger

In the shape of a dark, rugged stranger.

Perhaps too bizzarre a reminiscence

Fairytale, the last shread of innocence.

Not that we should regret our coming age,

But instead celebrate turning a page

Deep within the dusty volume of Life;

So provided mischief avoids strife,

No restraints on festivities tonight

And euphoria for a new ID

As now an adult forever you'll be.

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A poem dedicated to Steph, last year.

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