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The Red Woman Mourning -

Red pillar of sorrow
This single tear of blood
Over a brick gravestone
Black words
Seeming to crumble
No justice to the love
Buried under her shoes
To be forgotten

Author notes

This is another poem written about a moment when I saw someone.
The first line has been stuck in my head for the last four days since I saw her standing like a pillar of blood red infront of a gravestone.
I watched her wipe tears from her eyes before I lost sight of her... here is what came of it.

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  • Felix B. Hellsings
    July 21, 2009
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    I see

    That is pretty cool. At least ya still get inspired by things