There once was a truck
and his name was fred
he was s plendid truck
who carried beds.
Once when he was driving
on a birhgt, sunny day
he cam across something
that sat in his way
a white little rabbit
that was sitting on the road
he was sure it was a rabbit
and thus he slowed
with an amighty hah-wooooosh
fred slammed his brakes hard
he desperately tried to stop,
the rabbit just within yards
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Comments
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This is very light and cute. Poor bunny. Great imagery. Good one.


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A great piece with a little touch of suspense. You actually left it open at the end and it sounded like you needed to continue. I hope this was your thought. I like it as i am a great animal lover.




