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[ There once was a truck ]

There once was a truck
and his name was fred
he was s plendid truck
who carried beds.

Once when he was driving
on a birhgt, sunny day
he cam across something
that sat in his way

a white little rabbit
that was sitting on the road
he was sure it was a rabbit
and thus he slowed

with an amighty hah-wooooosh
fred slammed his brakes hard
he desperately tried to stop,
the rabbit just within yards



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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 3
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    This is very light and cute. Poor bunny. Great imagery. Good one.


  • condor gold member
    August 1

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    A great piece with a little touch of suspense. You actually left it open at the end and it sounded like you needed to continue. I hope this was your thought. I like it as i am a great animal lover.