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sally

torn by feelings of love
sally is divided into two.
Transform from who she is?
She doesn't know what to do.

Leave now and risk it all?
Then be united till their end.
or stay in all senses;
and be sepreate from her closest friend.

Her captors lurk in her shadow,
dogs that trail at her heels,
nourished by the love and lives,
they so callously steal.

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  • condor gold member
    August 1

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    A very sensuous piece that speaks openly and with forethought. It is rather sad in its content though, telling of a soul who is so lost, not knowing which way to turn, who who they should turn to. A very good poem considering you haven't written much in a while.


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    July 20

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    Good advice, Excellent A beautiful and truthful poem. Very spiritual and very touching beautifully none. i like the flow too and the words powerful.No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can aee.Alexander QQ...