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Hope You're Ready To Catch Me

Do you remember all those nights
when we were tucked into a bed of stars?

Do you think about those times,
where you never seemed that far.

Have you ever thought how I feel,
and what I wonder when I think of you.

Have you ever dreamed of me,
like I have of you.

I hope you're behind me,
Because you've got me wrapped around your finger...
got me singing a senseless melody.
You've got me heels over head,
remembering what you said,
so I hope you're ready to catch me.

Will you understand,
why I never let you close.

Will you need me,
like I know I need you.

Can I finally let go,
and just be myself.

Can I release all these feelings
trapped inside for you

I hope you're behind me,
Because you've got me wrapped around your finger...
got me singing a senseless melody.
You've got me heels over head,
remembering what you said,
so I hope you're ready to catch me.

Author notes

Started humming this while gettin me some tea and I rushed in here to type it down. I can't sing so Yeah...it's more poem-y-ish anyway

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  • Honest, happy and open. Gives the wonderful feeling of freeing, falling yet flying to security. A delightful experience.