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Life's Ups and Downs

Today I sit and ponder
reflecting of what was
and to be

Love and all it has to offer
I still can't believe in me
as I sit and wonder

My son is very ill
the doctors say maybe
a year

How can this be
a life I brought into
this world

Life's ups and downs
mysteries and deceiving

My life will have to wait
until his is over
How can I ask for happiness
in mine

Understanding this from you
is all that I can ask

If the burden me to much
then I set you free
For your heart is saddened
enough without me

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  • Nature Song silver member
    July 21
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    Tish,

    My dearest sister at heart. From one we became two...for all eternity were are twins bound by life. Your pain is my pain. This poem breaks my heart just to read it, and to know there is nothing I can do except to keep you in my prayers and Anthony...

    With all my heart,
    Sie


  • forty-one
    July 21

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    You could never be a burden to me, my love. No matter how long it takes... I will be right here waiting, although these words saddened me to no end.

    Love you,
    Troy