i. the expanse of silence is ear shattering
it's been days since a word was spoken. since my telephone rang or since we exchanged friendly greetings in public. it drains the hope from my mind through my ears, permanently deafening the once sweet, sentimental conversations we held not too distantly passed.
ii. the lack of a warm embrace is body quaking
sending chills of "nevermore" down this half broken spine. i would have once bent over backwards until i completely broke for just a few moments, your hand in mine. your arms around me is now just a memory, the flames of your touch now dowsed by the salt water that pours from these half blinded eyes. [blinded by this guilt i feel inside].
iii. the road to moving on is very unsettling
to the heart, mind and body. pain never experienced drips from every pore, as well as escaping through every god for saken breath. i could've been somebody, your somebody...but instead i'm left to marvel at the path of destruction i've left in our wake.
Author notes
recent break up.
not so great right now.
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Sorry for your loss but I hate green Ink/font I was always told as a child it was
A. the sign of madness
B the sign of ignorance
C the sign of hate
D a horrible colour.
your subjegation to this vile person however is inherant within this piece as the I is not capitalised as it should be denoting subserviance which should never be so pronounced within a loving relationship (unless of course within role play perameters).sorry for your loss....
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