He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
We’re going to be together forever
We promised with our fingers tangled
And our eyes gazing deep into each other’s souls
We’re going to be together forever
His hands in my hair, caressing my face
Our lips joined making little hearts
Our bodies moving in time
We were one again
He loves me not
Forever wasn’t long enough
He left me in the morning
We could be friends forever
But forever isn’t long enough
Her eyes belong in his now
They’ll be together forever
Like we were supposed to be
But this time her love will keep him
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me not
He loves her now
--20 July 2009
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god this is so sad...and really hit home. first time in a long time a poem made me cry. thanks for sharing.
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A wonderfully written piece that som many can relate to.
Forever, isn't long enough.
This is so true.
thank you for taking the time to enter.
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Wow....this is a feeling I truly can relate to...as can most people. but you managed to poignantly expressed.
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A very good poem with well organized stanza and sentences
the words used are perfect
i think this work should be valued by trophies
i wish you luck in the contests
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ouch...that last line was a doozy!! I hope everything works out for you just as you wish for them to. thanks for sharing this today. peace and light, kp
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I think this is just so amazing, I can barely find the words to review this. It is just beautiful, really beautiful. I am gobsmacked.
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great style
Easy to read full of emotion. good luck with your contest.
I really enjoyed reading this and I have lived it from the other end.. lol
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