Wishes delicately flutter
as wings wisp
echoes of whispers fall
upon natures lips
as tears trickle acquisitively
searching for a taste of simplicity
in a world of non-reality.
Author notes
http://vadalein.deviantart.com/art/Dragonfly-I-130099062
A contest entry
- Amazing Quickie! by Cyanide Dreams.
600 points, ended July 21, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hi Susan. A lovely write and presentation. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Congratulations on your trophy win. Well deserved.
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Wow, this was a really good. Your imagery was great and I liked the way this was structured. Your emotions were well thought out and it broke through the most in the last line. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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Oh, Wow!
This is simply spectacular, especially in your ability to take a few well-chosen words to paint a most graphic picture full of all our senses. It should have won GOLD and would have had I anything to say about it. Your talent glistens so brightly that it is seen from the heavens. Well done!
Much luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Beautiful hun - your words flow like silk from the lips of inspiration - best if luck in your contest
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what a treat to read something from you again!! I love the imagery in this piece...it calls to me. lol. Beautiful job dear.
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