am i still all you think about,
even after they filled your head with all that doubt?.
do you dream about what we could be?
question yourself, why you left me?
do i haunt your dreams?
do you yell for me with silet screams?
i still dream about you,
and feel the pain, it's true.
i tell everyone a lie,
no one suspects i still want to die.
am i missed?
or has the memory of me been dismissed?
you should know,
i'm slowly letting go.
i've met someone knew,
which is why i feel i can finally say adieu.
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I could feel the pain behind it, but I still sense a ray of hope behind it. You did a great job.
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Effortless ryhme is what i loved in this very "from the heart" write, the flow is great and yes, although it's about heartbreak, the reader can still see a ray of light, a hope at the end. It's difficult to let go, even if its slow. This is a good write, thanks for sharing.
lencio
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