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What at First Sight?

In the darkness I staggered
tripping over decaying roots
falling in mud reeking of corpses.
Choking on the putrid air, giving up proved to be my only option.
What beauty could this life hold?

Like the rainbow after a shower, that questioned beauty blinded me.
Like the sun; splashing my world with bright color.
It wasn't of nothing but a quickening of my heart
and the shortening of my breathe

To see before me
nothing that before it could make the rain stop.

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Prompt: Write about the first time you were actually attracted to someone without making it sexual & without using the words "boy" & "girl" & any of the tenses that could give away a gender [he, she, her, him]. Make it an absolutely genderless poem.

For Contest: I'd like: Dare

My Truth: Why did you do something when you knew it was wrong?
My Dare: I dare you to write a poem with no repeating words.
You cannot have the same word twice

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  • dieu.
    July 19

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    Write about the first time you were actually attracted to someone without making it sexual & without using the words "boy" & "girl" & any of the tenses that could give away a gender [he, she, her, him]. Make it an absolutely genderless poem.