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Stars

You don't think much of yourself.
You've got nothing to prove.
You hide you feelings High on that shelf.
Like you've got nothing to loose.
      (choruse)
But I, I see what's inside.
You've got the stars in your eyes.
And I, I know what you are capable of.
Trust me, baby, you're who I love.

You drink away all your pain.
You feel so misunderstood.
Honey, don't be acting so insane.
Because I'd die for you if I could.
      (chorus)
And I, I see what's inside.
You've got the stars in your eyes.
And I, I know what you are capable of.
Trust me, baby, you're who I love.

So please stop acting
Lie you are nothing.
because you are everyting to me.

        (chorus)
'cause I, I see what's inside.
You've got the stars in your eyes.
And I, I know what you are capable of.
Trust me, baby, you're who I love.

Author notes

This is a song about number 2. I see the stars in your eyes. enjoy and please feel free to comment truthfully

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  • Topaze gold member
    August 2
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    This was very well done, thank you for your fine entry.


  • Topaze gold member
    July 19
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    Very nicely done, my best wishes.

  • Sun-shiney
    July 19

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    its great. i like it reminds me of who i am. and how my boy has thrown it all for a girl of no faith. but i am greatful he loves me just the same