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My Walk With The Lord

My walk with the Lord
is not as easy as it would seem
it's hard to give up past sins
that still make me feel unclean

still doing some of the same mistakes
as I had done before
now as I walk in my new life
these sins are hard to ignore

  -Chorus-
I feel like a crutch
when I'm walking with the Lord
instead of graceful wings
allowing me to soar!

I try to read the bible, everyday
and complete my Sunday school lessons
I try but sometimes I don't make it
and still I receive His blessin's

He knows I'm not perfect
He sees with the holiest of eyes
still I don't give up
luckily He appreciates, my many trys

-Chorus-
I feel like a crutch
when I walk with the Lord
because I feel my sin
when I'm cut with His sword!

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  • a good piece, the song flows along with musical smiles and frowns, ah spirituality, it captures us all and makes us sing.

  • Anointing

    Very touching....as a poem its wonderful and i bet if i could here the melody its a wonderful song....it hit me deep emotionaly....I was brought up in the church and i know how it feels to always be weighed down by your sins...thats suprising coming from somebody as young as me but i can relate....i think its a wonderful poem/song...

    • kikis1969
      July 26
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      Well being a baby christian I REALLY feel weighed down by ny sins! But i'm trying and that's better than not trying!

      Thank you for your wonderful comment!


  • DajaVoue56
    July 20

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    This is REALLY great! I can see what you're saying-it's exactly the way I've been feeling for so long...Since I don't know the tune, I don't know exactly how it flows as a song, but as a poem, it's amazing! It's powerful and just beautiful. No matter what you do, how many mistakes you make, just have faith in the Lord and He will forgive, for He is merciful and great!
    GodBless

    • kikis1969
      July 20
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      when I write, CHORUS, for me a picture A choir singing the words. That's just me! Thank you for your comment! I am so bleesed and thankful that He IS a forgiving God!

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