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"I'm on my way down now, I'd like to take you with me"

I have sand in my shoes and the beach is miles from here.
Senile old man gave me directions the opposite way I was headed, then went back to talking softly to himself.  To his invisible chess partner. About his long-dead wife.
My feet are broken and bleeding from walking for what seems like days.
Lost in a place I can't legally be.
What a let down.
What a bust.

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  • wow cherry what a nasty old guy..get sat/nav on your cell phone..that wont happen again...pete

  • Bob Fox
    July 19

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    Well

    Sounds like a nightmare poet. That old guy...maybe he is your demon. Lol But one very interesting piece of writing indeed.