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Sweet Dreams

(*Inspired by the writings of mcfreeman)


Slumber deeply wrapped
in your warmth
kissed softly the nights dew
dreaming

Author notes

Reading a new poet today and was inspired!!!!

Thank you mcfreeman!

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  • Lurie
    July 19
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    Hey Eddy!!!!! Thanks Bro!!! Love you!! ME!!!

  • Just4u
    July 19

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    An exquisite moment frozen now forever in time...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Sherry gold member
    July 19

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    Lovely

    Laura, this is peaceful and comforting a very lovely piece. This would cure if not help insomia if perhaps these feelings would come to all of us and bring that security or comfort in that touch of such love. Helping the mind and heart to rest.
    Beautifully done~ Hugs sissy ♥


    • Lurie
      July 19
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      Hey there me SherryBear!!!

      Hey sis, glad you liked it!!!!How've you been that past few days?

  • i am awake once more, to dream of sleep and love.


    • Lurie
      July 19
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      Good~Morning Ian...glad to see you up and about!!!!!


  • Lurie
    July 19
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    Thank you Rick.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    July 19

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    Lovely lines. Nicely done.
    I had to read this one in particular - http://allpoetry.com/poem/5535095


  • Lurie
    July 19
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    Thank you Shy Little Lamb.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 19

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    This is pretty cut short and sweet really good though keep the good work up Thank yuou for sharing and commenting havc a great day now.

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