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Sleep, for it is cold.
Hibernate, for it freezes.
Wait, but be present.

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From an ongoing series of Haiku I've been working on.

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  • supcabe
    July 20
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    Haiku are actually very simple. At least to me. Also take into consideration that mine are an English/Western imitation.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 20
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    Um, I think you should talk to Myron or Azure85 about haikus. They're pros. There is A LOT more to a haiku than most people know. Very hard and sometimes complicated. Anyways welcome to allpoetry!!

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