You can't express how you feel,
They don't care that you are alone,
They are paranoid people and have problems of their own,
So we stay in a stress,
Everybody stays in a mess,
They don't care if you are alive or dead,
They not bothered what going through your head,
Life ripped us apart,
Life has taken our hearts,
Sick and tired of what we have saw,
We find it easier if we ignore,
We just cannot care what they say,
So we just let it be swept away,
Why can't we speak?
Why must we be afraid of change?
We never like it in our own feet,
People don't like us if we stay the same,
People don't like us when we begin to change,
We must do something,
We can't let this just be,
Why do we have to pull all these strings?
Just to make people see,
Why must we be ignored?
Why must we be misunderstood?
Why can't we all be adored?
Why can't we just do some good?
Why can't we speak?
Why must we be afraid of change?
We never like it in our own feet,
People don't like us if we stay the same,
People don't like us when we begin to change,
What did you think
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Man I really like this one, it really makes you think.
And it's all so true, it's like people are pushing against us from both sides, they want you to change one second but when you really do, they don't like it.
I loved it.
Great job.
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Thanks Krystal, that is very kind of you to say
Your poem was better though
It really was very good!!
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woooooooow,it's awesom, it's ma favourate from your stuff,so meaningful, you are so talented !!!
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oh and thank you for calling me talented
Even though I think you are more talented than me deedee!
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Thank you again deedee! I wrote this poem ages ago! Can't even remember what inspired me to write it
But thank you for your lovely words
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I believe that this is exactly what happens to someone who is having overdose of humanism. This is how I grasp it.
Nice piece!
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Thanks! You are very kind I'm glad you liked it
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Welcome To Allpoetry
It would probably read better if the title and subject were,"we never like it in our own shoes"...just a suggestion. There are a couple of errors in grammar, in this poem, but over all, you have written a very thought provoking poem!
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on this site!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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