After so many days without;
So many hours spent longing for
Your touch, one kiss exploded
With your familiar taste.
Your sweetness flowing over me,
That taste of you mouth
Watering after so much time
Without that familiar taste.
One kiss of longing
Turning into a shower of
Love, all beginning with
One kiss from your lips.
You sweetness, melting me
Though I had tried so hard
For you to keep my distance;
I didn't want to push you.
But one single kiss;
The taste of you, pulling
Me into you like a
Whirlpool of love.
It's amazing what a simple kiss
Can cause when it has not been tasted
In several days that were filled with
The familiar taste of you.
Author notes
as usual this isn't exactly what i was going for but also as usual not bad consider its not what i started to write in my head.
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Comments
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Very good write
hate to say i went through ths so many times but you put it perfectly into poem and ounce i started i couldnt stop til i read it all.
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This is a great take on the title. I like to see where titles take people(: this one could've gone in several different directions, but yours was the closest to what I was expecting. Thanks for sharing!
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I'm looking at verse 2, line 2: I think you need a comma between 'you' and 'mouth' and a hyphen bewen 'mouth' and 'watering.' I like this. It's sensual and romantic. Delicious!
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