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Smile Pokey Loves you

cupcakes make me smile
as does burning down the whole town!
cupcakes make me...
out of bread and butter...
i smile cupcakes
why?...
because the cupcakes love me
hail the cupcakes for they have created us all!
i lay my head down and smile....
cupcakes!
the cupcakes make me smile!

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  • Heva Feva
    August 6

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    Oh how cute! I also love cupcakes, perhaps not as much as you though [=
    Very nice poem, I love it. Perhaps you could capitalise some letters that should be starting with a capital letter!... Bit of a pet peeve of mine...

    "hail the cupcakes for they have created us all!" !!! [=

    Good luck and thanks for entering my contest! Also, thanks for making me smile!
    -heva


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    July 19

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    hmmm...this sounds like a friend of mine...I think I will send her a link to it!! thanks for the smile!! good luck with the contest...peace and light, kp