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Marching Band

Forms flowing freely
through marked time and space.
Sweet symphonies squalled
by horns of various size and shape.
Marked melodies marched
to the beat of the drums.
While witnesses watch
the dance between
musicians and their love.

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  • dieu.
    July 19
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    write something that isn't depressing or about a boy/girl.


    • perfect relief
      July 29
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      sorry i misread the dare...so i had to write something new. but i definitely wasn't going to miss out on this contest