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You're Beautiful

Your essence is when a
blossom blooms and holds its scent
arousing a breath of sweet perfume air

Your flawless  face
Opens into a beautiful flower

Your smile serenade ....
kissing lips of sweet honey

Your tender touch of soft petals
blanket my embrace

I forever want to hold you

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    November 6
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    Very lovely poetry.

    This is lovely! So poetic!


  • TwiztidMaggot
    July 30

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    This is really good. I don't know what else could be done, I think it's perfect the way it is... but that's just my opinion of it. I love how you wrote it, keep up your amazing work!

    twiztidmaggot ♥


  • Palas Kumar Ray
    July 20
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    I remember I wrote a poem "For a beautiful face".