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Would

Would life be more if you had less
Would there be guilt the more you confess
Would you believe if you didn't have faith
Would carrying a gun make you feel safe
Would having a house make you feel like home
Would you talk less if you didn't have a phone
Would you know the forest from the trees
Would you know liberty if you were free
Would you know honor if you didn't fight
Would you know wrong if there wasn't right
Would you cherish life if there wasn't death
Would you value the air if it was your last breath
Would you know wealth if you didn't get paid
Would you enjoy sex if you didn't get laid
Would you know how to love if you didn't hate
Would you judge others if you didn't discriminate
Would you know if you're young if you weren't old
Would you know if you weren't told

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  • leahcullen
    July 26

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    AMAZING

    Hey there stranger....so this is my first time back on this site in SUCH a LONG time and I was ssooo delighted to read this poem...its AMAZING!! Its something I needed to hear at the minute if that makes any sense.....It speaks ssoo much!!!! You have an amazing way with words!!!!! I LOVED this!!


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    July 19

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    I love it!! The rhythm is captivating and pulls you in from the very first line!! really good!! thanks for sharing it. peace and light, kp