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perfect day with you

A day so perfect,
just you and I,
our legs tangled together
without a second thought,
we kept each other close,
in a sweet,
but simple embrace.

You breathe out,
as i breathe in,
our lips so close,
your breath,
turns into mine,
holding each other in
as long as we can.

Our eyes meet,
in the perfect silence,
and i dont know
if you can see,
how much emotion,
you bring out in me.

the day was perfect...
just you,
and me...

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  • sounds like fun under the sun!! your passion shines through brilliantly! the piece isn't weighed down with lots of uneeded words! great job. thanks for sharing! peace and light, kp