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Love Is Still Here...

Tears started rolling
As I heard what once used to be our song
I never thought that its meaning
wouldn't apply to us now after so long

I thought I wouldn't cry anymore
I accepted the fact you walked out the door
Just move on is the best thing to do
Now I'm crying like a fool

Busy I've been
Happy is hard to pretend
Trying not to think of you
But at the end of the day you're the last thing I think of boo

Today I sat...idle; in mind, heart
and soul
Thinking of the last words you said...
Man they were cold

I Think of you every day
Pray for you every night
Hoping one day
that you'd see the light

Love is still here...

Reminiscing about the past
Longing for us to last
but what's done is done...
I'll shed a tear until there is none........left in my body

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  • whoudini
    July 28

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    Very sad and , yes there is always hope but , than sometimes you have to let go and go on for there are better things, yet discovered and well , didnt

    have any complaints and it flowed nicely with all its points and did like the last lines, whats done is done , and ill shed a tear until there is none left in my body, its a very good ending to a very powerful poem and thanks fully enjoyed , although sad but everything has to end but than, that only the beginning of something new.