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Forgetting

Forgetting is like dying
except more letters are involved,
but the principle remains
that what you had is gone.

Death is the end of the future
to forget is the end of the past
all that's left is the present,
so honey, make the present last.

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  • Lyrically N Gaged
    July 27
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    A very good poem.

    Keep writing, young poet.


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    July 22

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    Promise ... sing

    Death is the end of the future
    to forget is the end of the past
    all that's left is the present,
    so honey, make the present last.


    At present the present presentation is more than welcome


  • Cup-a-Joe
    July 19
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    You are how old? I think this is very good. And very thought provoking.
    You did good.
    Joe