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Danielle,

Danielle,

I was used. I was beaten. I was steped on...
I was ignorant. I was tolerent...
I was left. I was torn. I was pushed...
I was on the edge. I was about to jump...

Im saved. Ive grown. Im moving on.
Im worn out. Im standing straight.
Im looking forward...

Keep your head up sweetie
Because there is always someone
trying to beat you back down..


Love, BrandiMichele
(aka FarFromFlawless)

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FarFromFlawless

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  • bell-18
    July 26
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    its really great

  • This was good, but the problem is,
    it's not prose.
    Ad I checked and re-checked
    and re-re-checked
    and i don't have any Anonymized
    in my favorites.