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goodbye to yesterday.

it's over,
fuck the dreams we had,
and forget the plans we made,
they'll follow me to the grave.
and you'll be better off this way,

leave us in the past,
dream for tomorrow and live for today,
but say goodbye to yesterday,
say goodbye to our memories,
say goodbye to me.


you don't need something as broken down as me,
good for nothing but heartache and writing dark poetry.
i'll do nothing but make you sick,
make you worry about my sanity
and remind you of your own mortality.

leave us in the past,
dream for tomorrow and live for today,
but say goodbye to yesterday,
say goodbye to our memories,
say goodbye to me.

we never dreamed it would end like this,
but it doesn't matter,  it still did.
we never saw it coming until it was too late to save,
so say goodbye as it slips away,
say goodbye to yesterday.
say goodbye to me.

we've got no reason to keep holding on,
soon enough we'll both move on.
we don't need to live with the pain,
there's no reason to keep bleeding this way.
so say goodbye to me,
and goodbye to yesterday.

leave us in the past,
dream for tomorrow and live for today,
but say goodbye to yesterday,
say goodbye to our memories,
say goodbye to me.

it's all over now,
nothing left to do but mourn.
we tried and fought,
but still both our hearts are torn.
abandon ship, we were just too late to save.
say goodbye to yesterday,
and hope tomorrow's going to be a brighter day.

leave us in the past,
dream for tomorrow and live for today,
say goodbye to yesterday,
say goodbye to our memories,
say goodbye to me.

Author notes

meh. what more is there to say? the darkness in my heart has expanded and escaped onto the pages again. it's a neverending cycle i do believe.

i want the truth, be harsh. i deserve it.

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Comments

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  • pkoirish
    September 1
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    wonderfully written

    very nice and full of imagery and raw emotion... beautifully done...
    PKO

  • wow!!! i loved it. i can completely relate to it too. You do put your work down too much. you are very talented and i love the way the emotion just pours out of the poem and into the person reading it.

  • Great

    well i see were getting better as well at writing well here is what i think i think that this poem is great could use some more flashy vocabulary other than that great job and you put yourself down way to much work on that for me bye for now great job.

  • aawwweeeezzzz is this because of addison if it is *starts to growl* I'LL KILL HIM *snarling and growling* ............*sigh* i love the poem tho


    • Xx.Toxic.xX
      July 24
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      lol, yeah. it was about him at first, then it switched out and i was thinking more of most people in my life, with the exception of you and a few others. (rabbits count as people, right?)

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