Citizens of Delphi rush toward the festivity:
Ladies! Please! One at a time!
Healers, hold on tight to your medicine jars!
Archers! Refrain from demonstrating your skill; it is highly unnecessary.
Musicians, the crowd simply can't hear you...maybe later.
Soothsayers! Stop muttering underneath your breath.
Artists, how many paintings did you bring? What!
You there! The poet, yes, you...are you writing this down?
Brother...why are you laughing? These poor mortals...
Author notes
A contest entry
- The Ludi Apollinares Conest by Aerden.
1600 points, ended July 19, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - .*•.¸History.¸.•*. by fairy princess k.
630 points, ended August 10, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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kool
Kool poem =) , you have a unique style of writing , i like the size of this peice of poetry ,it is perfect size k .thanks for entering my contest .
wonderful k
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Wonderful
Very creative. What a very unusual write. Sure took some imagination to come up with that title. And the text is very interesting. Congratulations on the bronze.
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This is very cool, and you wrote it in the traditional style too! You have the greatest ending, it is a delightful tribute to the Ludi Apollinares!
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Wonderful and chosing the name Apollo is brilliant. Congrads for the trophy!
Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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*snicker* I can imagine Diana having a field day with the Games. Thank you for entering this poem in my contest.
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